The third assignment was to go back into the 60 pencil sharpeners and refine/ recreate 24 more, using what we learned from the first critique. (Use the full page, shadows, line quality)
The best: 8 The forms perspective is correct and the side orthographic does a good job communicating the form. The transparent top is well communicated also.
The worst: 14 The structure has horrible ellipses and the shading could be clearer on the form. The orthographics need to be cleaned up more and do a better job of communicating the form.
